Thursday, January 12, 2012

Boardroom essay


     Would you like to do something for the environment? Do you want to make the air cleaner in your area? Do you want to take care of this world? Well, I do. I am here presenting to you an awesome product - The Fake Fireplace. It is a fireplace which will do all these for you, and much more. It is of great quality. It saves money, and thus helps the poor.  Hence I request you to put my commercial on the 3’ o clock news?  
     The Fake Fireplace is the ultimate fireplace. It is long lasting as it could run for several years without requiring any maintenance. It does not need any chimney. Also, you will not breathe in hazardous air, since it is a fake fireplace.
     This product has also made lives easier. It does not increase your electricity bills as it runs on an alternative energy source. It is really cheap so that everybody can afford it. We have a lot of satisfied customers. About 80% of the people who use our product approve of this product.
    Well, we all know that there are many products out there in the market that are cheap, but are they of good quality? Well this one is! It is non-inflammable as the company makes sure that there is a secret compartment that puts water on itself when it is on fire. It also can heat itself up to your desired temperature even when it is very cold outside. It never rests until you rest.   
     To those of you, who are nature lovers, this is a great product as it is eco-friendly. It uses solar energy. It is made out of recycled material. The solar panels recharge the batteries, which in turn powers the Fireplace. Also, the factory where it is made does not produce any harmful wastes.
     Having described these good qualities of my product, I request you again to put my commercial on TV on 3’ o clock news. As you have seen, it is an ultimate fireplace. It is very beneficial for the masses and is in great shape. So please put my commercial on TV. It will create awareness to the masses about the product and will benefit everybody. This will also help grow the popularity of your program.

       

Tuesday, January 3, 2012

Review of the Fake Fireplace commercial

     I was really nervous when I was being recorded, since neither me or Iqbal remembered our lines. We used to remember one line and then say it on the camera, then close the camera, then memorize the next line and say it in camera and then that whole process repeated until we were done. I think we did O.K. Well, it was better than the reviews give to us by the Mr. Sticky group who gave us one star out of a hundred. I mean our commercial wasn't that bad. It should have at least gotten five out of five like the Nutrilite group. But, I have learned an important lesson. It is really hard to make one commercial with only limited supplies.